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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #person #culture #character #choice #clothes
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Today, the preferences of
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 about their outfits widely vary depending on numerous factors. A large number of
people
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 argue that a person's personal features or which country or tradition they belong are noticeable from their dressing styles. While I accept that some conventional
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peoples' minds,
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 approach is wrong from an ethical point of view. There is a staggering number of dressing styles across the world and it is undeniable that they may be affected by culture and become a descriptive factor for their nation.
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, in a number of cultures, there are special outfits for their religious events or specific days and it is all too often a common custom for the community to wear them on
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 days. Evidence for
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 appears in the Indian culture as their wedding dress is quite different from other cultures.
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, regardless of culture, local
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 in some countries wear some
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 customized according to climate. To illustrate, the climate of the Africa continent is unbearably hot, so the majority of
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 prefer to wear white
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 since the white colour is the most reflective colour for the sunlight. From another point of view, I think that judging the individuals'
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 based on their
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 is one of the most prejudices and misleading behaviour patterns.
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,
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's
character
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 is so complicated that cannot be solved by looking only at the dress. If
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's
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 of choice constituted
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mostly dark colours or vice versa, it does not mean that they do not have cheerful or depressing personalities.
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, I have to concede that sometimes the emotional situation of
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 resorts them to choose their
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 according to their mood.
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, when women are in a great mood, the majority of them prefer colourful
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.
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, it cannot be an adequate reason to classify
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 by their dressing styles. In conclusion, the dressing preferences of
people
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 may represent their customs.
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, I disagree with the argument that their
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 their
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. It should be born in the mind that
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 sometimes show
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's mood, yet it cannot be an accurate reference for their
character
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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