The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens’ health rather than on protecting the environment.Do you agree or disagree?

The average life expectancy of human life has decreased exponentially in recent years.
Accordingly
, some
people
suggest that the government should diminish the amount of
money
allocated for expenditures on environmental amendments and focus on medical
research
and provide more economical resources
instead
. While I accept that citizens' health is a more serious case than the
environment
, I would argue that resorting to paying less attention to the
environment
is not a permanent solution. Medical
research
are
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an indispensable part of society's future so I believe that it is appropriate that governments spend more
money
on it.
Firstly
, the number of
disease
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has increased markedly and every day a new genre of disease emerges.
Thus
, governments should direct their attention to medical
research
rather than environmental issues.
Secondly
, the
environment
can be existed by itself without any human intervention.
Moreover
,
research
indicates that the
environment
can rebuild itself in a short time even if
people
devastates
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it completely so I welcome
this
idea.
On the other hand
, it is not
also
an approach that the governments spend no
money
on the
environment
. The quality of human healthcare and the healthy
environment
are directly proportional. To illustrate,
people
living in cities without any trees are more likely to catch a disease, as the air that they breathe is dirty because trees are responsible to refine air. It is unquestionable that
people
rely on the
environment
even if the
environment
does not. Apart from that, many doctors suggest to their patients that travelling to a place where is a repository of natural beauties may contribute to their health situations. In conclusion, I agree with the argument and it is acceptable to some extent. It may be more beneficial for
people
that the government
spend
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more
money
on healthcare expenditures.
However
, it should be kept in mind that the
environment
is
also
a bulk part of human life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • moral obligation
  • advanced treatments
  • economic benefits
  • workforce
  • healthcare costs
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • comprehensive benefits
  • investment
  • global sustainability
  • long-term health security
  • disease proliferation
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