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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

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Some forecasts say, that in the nearest future there will be no drivers in
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public
transport
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. And only passengers will stay in
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 buses or
cars
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. I believe that the disadvantages of
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transport
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,
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 as the growth of unemployment and the probability of hacker attacks, do not overweight
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the benefits
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 of the lower risk of road
accidents
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 and the reducing amount of harmful emissions. To start with, decreasing the number of drivers will lead to a huge wave of unemployment.
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, due to the popularization of electronic systems for making an appointment with a doctor, thousands of secretaries have lost their jobs in the
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 couple of years in Russia.
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,
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 busses and
cars
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 might be attacked by hackers. In the worst case,
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 attacks may cause a serious road accident and the death of passengers. There is no perfect device that cannot be hacked, even large companies developing
driverless
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cars
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,
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 as Ford, reported hacks at the testing stage.
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, there are two main advantages of
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transport
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.
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 of all,
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 system of
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vehicles
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 will lead to
lowering
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a lowering
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 of car
accidents
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. It will happen because most
of
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transport
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crushes
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crashes
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 occur due to the human factor. And if there is no human inside, there will
less
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accidents
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. The latest tests of Ford’s
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vehicles
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 proved it.
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, modern
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vehicles
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 will not affect
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the environment and on
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human health as destructively as ordinary
transport
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 do.
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,
driverless
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cars
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 consume less gasoline, and some even use alternative sources of energy,
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 as solar panels on the roof. In conclusion, despite the increased risk of unemployment and hacker attacks on
driverless
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vehicles
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, they are able to lead us into a modern future, with fewer
accidents
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 and fewer harm
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 nature.
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