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Many doctors are concerned about the high use of computer games by children and young people. What mental and physical problems may arise from excessive use of these games? How could these problems be reduced?

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The importance of
children
 to develop their mental ability which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial ;while others reject
this
 notion. The substantial influence of
this
 trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. I totally agree with
this
 statement so I will elaborate my views for favouring the negative impact of
this
 trend and
this
 will lead to a logical conclusion. Analysing the statement and explaining
further
, the
first
 and the foremost reason behind
this
 is that physically weak if
children
 spend the most of the
time
 on these
activities
 so they are not fit physically and mentally.They always feel lazy and not active.
Moreover
, they are addicted to watching tv and playing video games so they watch crime episodes on TV and they will follow the same techniques so these wrong episodes on effects
children
 mental ability.
For example
, According to BBC ,news one child attempted suicide in India because his parents refused to play pub games.
Thus
,
children
 will be mentally upset If they spend more
time
 on these
activities
.
Furthermore
,
children
 will become introverts because they don't like spending
time
 with family and friends so they can not share problems with anyone if they cannot share what difficulties they are facing so they will be mentally disturbed and upset. In conclusion, 2
children
 playing video games, watching tv yet it has drawbacks like crime and adopt bad habits and feel mentally disturbed.In my ,opinion they will minimum spend
time
 on these
activities
 and more focus on physical
activities
 and education.
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