Write a letter to your friend who has asked you about a short course, which you have done. Write about the content of the course. The future benefit of the course.

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Dear Kiran, I hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. It has been so long since we were in touch but I have never forgotten all nostalgic moments. You have asked me about the

CELTA

course

which I did

last

year. It is a certificate

course

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one month and I am suggesting you

also

do it.

CELTA

stands for ‘Certificate in Teaching English to speakers of other languages. The main eligibility to enrol in

this

program is the age and that must be at least 20 years. It is a one month

course

which makes the person eligible to teach the English language anywhere in the world. The one month

CELTA

was the best thing that ever happened to me. The training was delivered by certified trainers,

brought

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out the best professor in me. The entire program was filled with various elements

such

as learning, fun, enjoyment and activities. It not only helps me to enhance my teaching skills but

also

develops

myself

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as a better person, better individual. After doing

this

diploma, I got many offers from different countries like

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USA, Dubai and Turkey. I am currently working as an English Teacher in Cambridge school, Model Town, Jalandhar. My salary is very lucrative. I am totally satisfied with my white-collar job. Without

CELTA

, I would not have been able to make

such

a position for myself. I hope I have satisfied your curiosity about

this

course

. in case you are interested and you want to get more information please go through the official website. Yours lovingly, Prabhjot Kaur

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

266 words

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Write a letter to your friend who has asked you about a short course, which you have done. Write about the content of the course. The future benefit of the course.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Some people believe that the internet has made books and libraries obsolete. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Provide reason and support with examples.

Nowadays, more and more children play computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is it a positive or negative development?

Some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centers is for privately owned cars to be banned, others however, think this is an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.