You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ...............,
Dear Adam,
Thanks for writing to me about your camping holiday and I would
love
provide my advice on it.
Personally, I love to go for outdoor holidays since Add the particle
love to
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
provides
picturesque views Correct subject-verb agreement
provide
and
Correct word choice
apply
gets
you away from busy city traffic and Correct subject-verb agreement
get
allows
you to visit hidden spots that you might not be able to explore in other trips. It connects you more with Correct subject-verb agreement
allow
the
nature and helps in self-discovery.
Correct article usage
apply
Although
,
I am sure you will be having Remove the comma
apply
a
time of your life Correct article usage
the
however
, you might face a few challenges if you do not plan your supplies and end up in Add the comma(s)
, however
area
with Add an article
an area
the area
lesser
network coverage. You should ensure that you have all essential equipment and food to save yourself from harsh weather.
Unfortunately, I Add an article
the lesser
would
not be able to join the tour considering I have an exam I Wrong verb form
will
am
preparing Wrong verb form
have been
from
a long time Change preposition
for for
however
, I am considering to reschedule
it Change the verb form
rescheduling
due to
overwork
I have been taking Correct article usage
the overwork
from
a few months. In any case, I would Change preposition
for
update
if I will be able to join you for Verb problem
like to know
this
adventure.
Yours truly,
MuhammadSubmitted by malikadeelkhaliq on
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task achievement
Ensure that you're consistently maintaining a friendly and personal tone throughout your letter. The transition between discussing the joys of camping and the possible challenges could be smoother and more personal.
coherence cohesion
Work on creating clear transitions between paragraphs to improve the flow. Also, be explicit when offering advice, providing concrete tips or personal anecdotes to illustrate your points.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,