In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
The number of
people
who have finished their curriculum and taken a Use synonyms
job
position is increasing in some countries. Use synonyms
This
essay agrees that the cons of living with Linking Words
parents
after finding a Use synonyms
job
or finishing an education outweigh the pros. Use synonyms
Although
, living with family could help individuals to make a plan for their Linking Words
future
Use synonyms
life
more easily, forcing a lot of money loads on Use synonyms
families
and not having self-independency are the two main drawbacks.
Use synonyms
First
of all, living with family could make youth Linking Words
people
more dependent because if they face a problem which they can not solve, they know that their family will always stay with them and support them. Use synonyms
As a result
, in their Linking Words
future
Use synonyms
life
, they would not manage a family alone. Use synonyms
For example
, in Iran, about 33 per cent of married Linking Words
life
will be ended to divorce because of too much attachment of couples to their Use synonyms
families
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Most Linking Words
families
have been expecting their children to help them financially after finishing school or starting a new Use synonyms
job
but living with them not only would not help them to reduce their costs but Use synonyms
also
would make Linking Words
parents
work twice as hard as they can to provide the needs of the family. Use synonyms
For instance
, New York Times reported in 2008, the cost of living of Linking Words
families
whose young adults live with them had been rising up more than 48 % only in America.
Use synonyms
In contrast
, spending the time after the educational period in Linking Words
parents
' house would be helpful for young adults to think about their Use synonyms
future
plans without any stress. At Use synonyms
first
, it seems very useful but if someone does not start their independent lifestyle, they can not make any specific plan for his Linking Words
future
. Use synonyms
For example
, the number of young Linking Words
people
's success rate who have lived independently since 2015 has been three times higher than Use synonyms
people
who have preferred to live with their Use synonyms
parents
.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
Although
starting a Linking Words
life
with Use synonyms
parents
after graduation or starting a new Use synonyms
job
would be useful for youths' Use synonyms
future
plans, Use synonyms
this
situation could affect their Linking Words
future
Use synonyms
life
and it could create a lot of monetary problems for their Use synonyms
parents
. So, the advantage of not living with Use synonyms
parents
outweigh the disadvantages.Use synonyms
Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...