In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.
The number of
people
who have finished their curriculum and taken a job
position is increasing in some countries. This
essay agrees that the cons of living with parents
after finding a job
or finishing an education outweigh the pros. Although
, living with family could help individuals to make a plan for their future
life
more easily, forcing a lot of money loads on families
and not having self-independency are the two main drawbacks.
First
of all, living with family could make youth people
more dependent because if they face a problem which they can not solve, they know that their family will always stay with them and support them. As a result
, in their future
life
, they would not manage a family alone. For example
, in Iran, about 33 per cent of married life
will be ended to divorce because of too much attachment of couples to their families
. Secondly
, Most families
have been expecting their children to help them financially after finishing school or starting a new job
but living with them not only would not help them to reduce their costs but also
would make parents
work twice as hard as they can to provide the needs of the family. For instance
, New York Times reported in 2008, the cost of living of families
whose young adults live with them had been rising up more than 48 % only in America.
In contrast
, spending the time after the educational period in parents
' house would be helpful for young adults to think about their future
plans without any stress. At first
, it seems very useful but if someone does not start their independent lifestyle, they can not make any specific plan for his future
. For example
, the number of young people
's success rate who have lived independently since 2015 has been three times higher than people
who have preferred to live with their parents
.
In conclusion, Although
starting a life
with parents
after graduation or starting a new job
would be useful for youths' future
plans, this
situation could affect their future
life
and it could create a lot of monetary problems for their parents
. So, the advantage of not living with parents
outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by ramtin.n1374 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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