Many government think the conomic progress is their most important goal.some people ,however,think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Different states have their own ways of evaluating their

progress

.

However

,some individuals claim that evaluating

wealth

is the most significant aim.whereas,others believe that their other important

factors

are equally relevant to be considered.In my opinion,the government should be able to consider other

factors

like the

health

and

education

of the community rather than looking at the

wealth

only. There are different

factors

that the ruling state can aim in checking out the

progress

.

First

and foremost,evaluating the

health

of individuals in the

country

is one of the most important

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.

This

is because without a healthy population achieving certain goals in life will be impossible.

For example

,according to ,experts 80% of the

country

progress

is achieved through the good

health

of the citizens.

Furthermore

,another important factor is

education

.To illustrate

this

,if the population has a good number of people well educated

then

the

progress

of the

country

can be evaluated

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because the

education

will bring significant changes to the development of the given

country

.

Thus

, the

progress

of the

country

can be evaluated by either

health

of the population or the

education

level of the individuals.

On the contrary

,some people argue that evaluating the economy is the only goal of accessing the

progress

of the

country

.

Moreover

,most of the government expenditure is equated in monetary terms.

For example

,evaluating the amount of money spent in production can only be done by finding out the

wealth

accumulated.

Additionally

,the

country

gross domestic product can easily be achieved by calculating the economic expenditure.

For instance

, economists evaluate the

progress

of the

country

through monetary values.

Thus

,following up on

wealth

is the easiest and convenient way of accessing the

country

progress

. To sum up,as much as accessing the economy is relevant,

however

,the government should embrace other

factors

in examing the

progress

of the

country

like

education

and

health

.