Many government think the conomic progress is their most important goal.some people ,however,think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Different states have their own ways of evaluating their

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,some individuals claim that evaluating

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is the most significant aim.whereas,others believe that their other important

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are equally relevant to be considered.In my opinion,the government should be able to consider other

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like the

health

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and

education

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of the community rather than looking at the

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only. There are different

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that the ruling state can aim in checking out the

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and foremost,evaluating the

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of individuals in the

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is one of the most important

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is because without a healthy population achieving certain goals in life will be impossible.

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,according to ,experts 80% of the

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progress

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is achieved through the good

health

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of the citizens.

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,another important factor is

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.To illustrate

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,if the population has a good number of people well educated

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the

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of the

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can be evaluated

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because the

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will bring significant changes to the development of the given

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.

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, the

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of the

country

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can be evaluated by either

health

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of the population or the

education

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level of the individuals.

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,some people argue that evaluating the economy is the only goal of accessing the

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of the

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,most of the government expenditure is equated in monetary terms.

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,evaluating the amount of money spent in production can only be done by finding out the

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accumulated.

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,the

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gross domestic product can easily be achieved by calculating the economic expenditure.

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, economists evaluate the

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of the

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through monetary values.

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,following up on

wealth

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is the easiest and convenient way of accessing the

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progress

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. To sum up,as much as accessing the economy is relevant,

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,the government should embrace other

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in examing the

progress

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of the

country

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like

education

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and

health

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