Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?

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modern era, the crime rate has been rising significantly, some studies

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that after being released from jail, the criminal still recommits

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issue.

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with, Since most of the criminals tend to be impatient persons, they might recommit

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in being put back into prison.

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type of personality may be quite hard to adjust

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the trigger to those persons to break the law again.

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difficult situation for some former

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to make a living by doing some jobs, because they do need to take some time for earning money and

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need to wait until they get the wage or salary.

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the easier and faster way to get the money, especially for those who could not wait. To deter

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committing

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measures must be introduced by governments to punish wrongdoers. The full weight of the law must be imposed

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all serious offences.

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, the people, who are found guilty

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time

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wrongdoing, should be sentenced to capital punishment. Serving serious punishment could be the solution to reduce the rate of crime

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from the former criminal. In conclusion, the personality of the people could be the reason why they do wrong

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, it is still the duty of the authorities that should implement

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serious punishment policies to prevent

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