You were sent by your company to attend a meeting in another country, but you are not happy with the hotel your organizer booked for you. Write a letter to an organizer about the meeting details What you did not like about the hotel what you want organizer to do about it?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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letter to draw your attention that my company Younger Perspective has accounted for your skills in booking a proper hotel's
room
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for me before the meeting that I should attend after 3 days from now.
However
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, once I arrived I found 2 serious problems which I will mention in the following lines.
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, the electricity in the
room
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is not stable due to the corroded wires in the walls.
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, the shower in the bathroom is broken and the rust has covered it which means it is impossible to have a shower. These issues have troubled me and definitely have a negative impact on my performance as a representative of my company in
this
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meeting.
Therefore
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, I ask for replacing the wires in my
room
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with new ones, tackle the shower problem by repairing it or replacing it with the new one or changing my
room
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with another suitable one. I would appreciate it if you deal with these issues I mentioned at the earliest time it will be possible. Yours faithfully, Ehssan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • arrange/arrangement
  • specifics
  • cleanliness
  • amenities
  • service
  • location
  • improve
  • solution
  • alternative
  • accommodation
  • recommendation
  • organize/organizer
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