A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday • describe some possible disadvantages • say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer Write at least 150 words.
Dear Jessy,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. It's been a while since our Linking Words
last
road trip to Alaska. I am so excited to hear that you are interested in camping. Since it will be your Linking Words
first
time for go camping, I want to share some tips and tricks in order to give you an idea for organizing a great trip!
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First
of all, I believe that you would love a camping holiday, as there are a lot of activities for you and your families. Linking Words
For example
, you can spend your time together Linking Words
for
hiking around the campsite. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, you can go cycling and enjoy the beautiful scenic view. Linking Words
However
, there are Linking Words
also
some possible drawbacks of sleeping in tents. Linking Words
For instance
, you may lose your personal belonging if you leave Linking Words
it
in the tent when you are away. Another example is that some areas are the home of wildlife, Correct pronoun usage
them
therefore
all food should be kept in Linking Words
the
storage to protect them from animals.
Correct article usage
apply
Last
but not least, if you are decided where to go, please let me know as soon as possible so that I could prepare to join your trip Linking Words
in
Change preposition
apply
this
summer.
I can’t wait to see you!
Cheers,
JoyLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite