Some people think that government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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is one of the most important

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of

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. While some believe that free

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should be provided by the

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, others think that university

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should be

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by individuals. It is clear that

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should be available to everyone and need to be

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payed

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equally, there should be support for people who cannot afford it at the

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level. The

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aspect to point out is that everyone has human rights when it comes to

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.

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, it could be said that school fees should be free for students.

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, schools need to maintain

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environment and prepare for the materials, which costs a fortune. If the

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provided a free

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, the tax rates would increase in order to maintain schools or the condition of schools would be worse. These aspects would be a problem among the public.

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, it could be suggested that students from

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tend to struggle with their finances in terms of having higher

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.

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plays a vital role in our society in order to have

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decent job.

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, there should be a support

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for people who cannot afford

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to university.

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, the

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could let them borrow

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amount of money for

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and they would need to pay back when they started working after graduation.

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will give a fair opportunity to the public. To conclude, despite the fact that higher

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should be

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by individuals, there should be a consideration for people who have financial issues. If the

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provided the public with

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support

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, there would be benefits in modern society.