Some health professionals suggest that older people spend more time socializing with others and playing sports to stay healthy, but many retired people have experienced loneliness and a lack of fitness. Why has this happened? What can be done to address this?

In the contemporary

era

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a medicine is

evaluating

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with light speed, which means that geriatrics have more opportunities to enjoy

retire

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life

.

However

, there are numerous provokers for living unhappy golden age and many solutions can be deduced by

government

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and society. The causes of

this

appear to be focused on two areas, and a number of remedies

also

appear to be possible. Perhaps one of the causes of the problem is that modern people tend to overwork by

motivation

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of getting an excessive amount of money to live

its

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entire

life

by using them, meaning that from dust till dawn they obsessed only with work and career ladder movement, and forget to enjoy

life

at the moment.

For example

, my neighbour was

hard working

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, and never had time for friends, children and hobbies.

This

pattern appears to be global, with the result that now she

is not have

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does not have

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any friends with whom she can pass

enjoyable

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time, her children living their own

life

and visiting her once a year

,

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because they do not feel that they have strong family bonds with her,

consequently

, she is depressed and lonely.

Moreover

, another issue is that inflation on services and goods is not allowing pensioners to live happily, because pensions size enough only for cheap groceries and utilities.

For instance

, a size of monthly payment for my grandmother is 60 000 tenge,

where

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only standard

package

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for groceries from Magnum will cost at least 40 000

tenge

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.

Therefore

, she cannot afford to go out for dinner with friends in restaurants or enjoy the sea breeze overseas. Regarding potential solutions, probably the immediate step would be proper financing from the government.

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could be done

through

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increasing the

amount

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of payments to cure

this

problem.

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result

in

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inability

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ability

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the ability

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to enjoy the rest of

the

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life

for old-age pensioners.

Furthermore

, another possible remedy may be agitation from information

centers

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, where people will get

knowledge

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the knowledge

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that they have to live now, because tomorrow will not be, and yesterday cannot be changed. In conclusion, the main problems with loneliness and depression are the financing of wrinklies and

pursue

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to be

a

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rich, and these can be solved through the successful financing plan from politicians along with healthy

life

propaganda from

media

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