The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

Ever since the technological epoch took place, it is considered that the progression of any nation majorly relies on how many
science
-based resources a country has.
Hence
, a proposal of investing more capital on mainstream
subjects
than art
subjects
is put forwarded which in my perspective appears superficially attractive, though, in
such
pursuit, other
subjects
ought not to be overlooked. It is indubitable that by assimilating the knowledge of
science
any region would become self-sufficient. As scientific innovations contribute to progress in the field of medical
science
and even in space exploration, if a budget is allocated on providing
science
-related education, the prospect of a country’s development opens up. In long run, highly educated citizens would accelerate the growth by not only providing the services to the public but
also
by making discoveries. An example of
this
could be taken from the outbreak of covid-19 when developed Nations because of their advanced know-how of
science
became able to control the rage of
this
pandemic by innovating vaccines at the right time. Had developing Nations acquired
such
knowledge, their situation would not get worse.
Although
the above discussion makes it appealing to subsidize
science
subjects
relatively more than other
subjects
, the significance of art in the holistic development of the human mind cannot be neglected. Since, school curriculum, more often than not, supports rote learning, a major focus on academic
subjects
may halt psychological growth and may restrict learners to be creative and imaginative. An article of ‘The Hindus’,
for example
,
also
suggested that 8 out of 10
science
students lack creativity while encountering any real-life situation. Apart from
this
, inculcation of art and craft gives opportunity to the pupils to broaden their horizon before chasing their career, apparently giving birth to many singers, dancers and painters.
Therefore
, these should be
also
equally addressed in an educational setting. To conclude, it can be asserted that
instead
of providing higher financial support to mainstream
subjects
which no doubt is a prerequisite for a country’s development, equivalent importance needs to be given to other
subjects
so that individuals do not have to limit themselves to only one area.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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