Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People
have different views i
n
Change preposition
on
show examples
the question w
hether
Change preposition
of whether
show examples
that h
uman
Fix the agreement mistake
humans
show examples
would be more dependent or independent in t
he m
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
odern s
ociaty.
Correct your spelling
society
This
essay will d
icuss
Correct your spelling
discuss
both arguments and present my opinion. On the one hand, it is reasonable that
people
believe they will rely on each o
thers
Change to a singular noun
other
show examples
in the future. The
first
reason is globalization which requires us to promote interactions between regions and countries around the world.
This
means they need to have t
eam-work
Correct your spelling
teamwork
show examples
experience in order to complete international jobs.
Secondly
, nowadays,
people
tend to work more than in the past because they are ambitious to improve the quality of their life.
Therefore
, they have to receive supports from their family.
For example
, if parents have a
full-time jobs,
Correct the article-noun agreement
a full-time job
full-time jobs
show examples
their children are usually taken care of by the grandparents.
On the other hand
, many
people
think that we will be less dependent in modern life and I support
this
idea. Thank t
o t
Remove the preposition
apply
show examples
echnological development,
people
can take advantage of new innovations like the Internet.
For instance
, we can work from every p
laces
Change to a singular noun
place
show examples
in the world via the Internet, to prepare
a c
Change preposition
for a
show examples
onference b
ecome
Add the particle
to become
show examples
simple while using call video platform.
Additionally
, new g
enaration
Correct your spelling
generation
particularly is allowed to choose what their favour, many young decide to live away from home, even study in the foreign. As the result, they can be independent and self-confident in t
he d
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
aily life. To conclude, there are many viewpoints about the dependent in the future world. I personally believe that
people
will be less reliant i
n
Change preposition
on
show examples
the era of technology.
Submitted by Andy on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • interdependence
  • globalization
  • technological advancements
  • collective action
  • digital evolution
  • minimal reliance
  • direct interaction
  • empowered
  • access to technology
  • societal expectations
  • personal choice
  • leverage
What to do next:
Look at other essays: