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many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough physical exercise. what do you think are the causes of this? what solutions are there to this problem?

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At present, many physicians believe that
people
 hardly
exercise
 due to various reasons,
such
 as laziness. Both government and companies could fix
this
 issue by educating
people
 about physical activities and providing them with a free
gym
 membership. The primary reason why
people
 do not
exercise
 is that they are lazy to do it, most
people
 spend their
time
 about 10 hours working, when they are at home, obviously, too tired to do anything.
For instance
, some workers get off from work at a late
time
, so when they arrive at home, they just want to rest. Another reason is that the cost of being a
gym
 member is too high, many
people
 cannot afford it, especially, poor
people
.
For example
, in my country, many beggers do not even have any money to buy some food, so paying for being a
gym
 member is out of the question. The ways that could solve
this
 problem are come from the government by advertisement, educate
people
 why they should do
exercise
 and the advantages they could get from doing it. The companies can
also
 help, they should change the
time
 when employers start and get off their works,
therefore
, they will have
time
 to do
exercise
 and they
also
 can help by offering free
gym
 membership for every worker in every company, by doing
this
 they will not worry about money since they do not have to pay it. In England, many companies already have free membership as an employers' benefit. In conclusion, some
people
 are lazy about doing some exercises and some
people
 do not have enough money to pay for the
gym
, thereby, nowadays,
people
 only do it once in a while. In order to manage
this
 issue, the government should teach
people
 about why we should do
exercise
 and
then
 the company can solve by changing working hours and giving the workers benefit by being in member in the
gym
 for free.
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