You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter •say how you found out about the plans •explain what problems your neighborhood will face •suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear Mr. Xubair, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to complain about the new airport, that will start construction in our range. Currently, we are living in a residential space, and it is very peaceful for living. Our children have a sufficient place to play. But the

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day when I got back from my office to home I saw a big billboard and there I knew that a large airport will build right beside our residential area. It is less than 1km from my home. Because it's a residential space with a school, it is not a good idea to build

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kind of construction over here. We will face many problems because of

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, especially the sound pollution. It will be difficult for our children to study, and on top of that, there will be more people will going to roaming around in

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residential area, which will make us unsafe. So, I know that

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airport is very important for our country, but for the better of all of us,

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should be moved to another place where fewer people live. I would appreciate it if you could look into

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matter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Sudipta Ghosh

uadayghoshFri Dec 15 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph pertains to a single clear idea, avoiding general statements that do not contribute to the central topic.

task achievement

Make sure to fully develop each point with adequate explanation and expansion, giving detailed suggestions and a full explanation of the issues.

coherence cohesion

Use a range of cohesive devices to aid in the flow of your letter. This will help in connecting ideas and paragraphs clearly.

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While addressing formal recipients, maintain a consistently formal tone throughout your letter and avoid informal expressions.

coherence cohesion

Closing the letter with an action point or a summary can leave the recipient with a clear understanding of your expectations.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

208 words

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