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You recently discovered plans to build a new airport in your area and are unhappy with it. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter •say how you found out about the plans •explain what problems your neighborhood will face •suggest some possible solutions to those problems.

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Dear Mr. Xubair, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to complain about the new airport, that will start construction in our range. Currently, we are living in a residential space, and it is very peaceful for living. Our children have a sufficient place to play. But the
last
 day when I got back from my office to home I saw a big billboard and there I knew that a large airport will build right beside our residential area. It is less than 1km from my home. Because it's a residential space with a school, it is not a good idea to build
this
 kind of construction over here. We will face many problems because of
this
, especially the sound pollution. It will be difficult for our children to study, and on top of that, there will be more people will going to roaming around in
this
 residential area, which will make us unsafe. So, I know that
this
 airport is very important for our country, but for the better of all of us,
this
 should be moved to another place where fewer people live. I would appreciate it if you could look into
this
 matter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Sudipta Ghosh
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph pertains to a single clear idea, avoiding general statements that do not contribute to the central topic.
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Make sure to fully develop each point with adequate explanation and expansion, giving detailed suggestions and a full explanation of the issues.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of cohesive devices to aid in the flow of your letter. This will help in connecting ideas and paragraphs clearly.
task achievement
While addressing formal recipients, maintain a consistently formal tone throughout your letter and avoid informal expressions.
coherence cohesion
Closing the letter with an action point or a summary can leave the recipient with a clear understanding of your expectations.
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