Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

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the internet can bring some advantages to children.

However

, they can be affected negatively if they use a

computer

on a daily basis. I definitely agree with

this

statement as I think negative impacts on them are stronger.

Hence

,

this

essay will discuss them.

To begin

with, doing something on the

computer

every day can have a negative effect on their health. While they are using it, they may have poor posture for a long time which can lead to more intense situations.

For example

, my friend, Talon, watched

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on his

computer

for 5-6 hours every day. One day, he felt terrible and it became worse.

Therefore

, he saw a doctor and found that he had office syndrome. Now, he has

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therapy at a hospital every week. You can see that if the body is broken, it is hard to cure it.

Moreover

, young people prefer many kinds of

computer

games, especially violent games. If they have played them for several hours, it is more likely to be aggressive. You can see that they like to shout and talk rude words to their friends when they play badly and do not do what they want.

As a result

, they may be used to behaving like

this

, and everyone

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not want to be their friends anymore. In the future, they might have problems with colleagues,

such

as lack of communication

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and self-control, when they work as a group. To sum up, spending most of their time using a

computer

, they may have issues with their fitness and development.

Therefore

, I believe

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outweigh

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.