Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.

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Nowadays dumping huge amounts of money into wedding expenses has become a usual thing.Whereas another group of people has different perspectives on

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matter.But in my point of view, it is unnecessary to spend much on marriage or even any other family functions. I will explain my stand on

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with detailed points. On one hand , we are all under peer pressure to host a grand marriage as per our family status.Even though

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practice is not a healthy one for us, we still do

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mistake.

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we should understand that marriage is just a legal process of registering the couple as life partners .

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, we no need to inform

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anyone other than our close ones .Yet we end up inviting a massive crowd and showing them the lifestyle we are living.

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, the amount of dowry , cost of the dress and even the varieties of foods we serve in dine matters to thee people who visit .So we are spending more money on these .

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, we live in a society where a child is still not able to get proper food on daily basis.And adding to

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, the survival in

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society has become quite challenging since all the basic prices of daily essentials are already at their peak.

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, if you need to use more funds on weddings you might even end up getting in debt.Rather we can invest in something useful . To conclude my point , with the above scenarios I can clearly take a decision that over expensed weddings are always not a recommended one.

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I am completely disagreeing to do so.

Arun Sat Nov 20 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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4 paragraphs

276 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Extravagant
Lavish
Societal norms
Cultural heritage
Economic benefits
Luxurious
Ceremonies
Designer outfits
Unforgettable experience
Obligation
Social status
Memorable
Personal fulfillment
Grand
Expectations
Local economy

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