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In many families today, both the parents are working. What are the advantages and disadvantages of it.

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Nowadays, both
parents
 in many families have a job. The positive side is that the family's budget will be more.
However
, the negative side is that
kids
 will not spend enough time with their
parents
 that
it
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which
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 might cause some issues. As for earning more money, it enables the
parents
 to make
children
's life more varied, interesting and amazing.
In other words
, additional money can be invested in some extracurricular activities for
kids
such
 as drama, vocal singing and music. I think that
such
 circles have a good effect on the kid's development.
Moreover
, extra money allows the
parents
 to give an excellent higher education for their
kids
 because the top world universities require a huge fee.
Thus
, in a family where mother and father work,
children
 have more opportunities due to the bigger family budget. In spite of a long advantages' list of having a job by mother and father at the same time, it results in decreasing family relationships. The former reason is that busy
parents
 can not provide their
children
 with all necessary fundamental needs
such
 as attention, care and help. To be more exact, a lack of these needs leads to the deterioration of the relationships. The latter reason is that
children
 can not rely on the constantly working
parents
 because the trustful relationships are based on a huge amount of communication that can not be because the
parents
 do not spend enough time at home. To conclude, both working
parents
 extend the
kids
' opportunities in accordance with the family budget but it might make worse the communication.
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