In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?
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, these kinds of sentences lead to unrealistic goals which could have a bad consequence on kids. Take a child who wants to be an artist as an example, they try hard but they are failed to be successful because they not only have a specific talent in Linking Words
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, lots of attempts would not compensate these shortages so that they will give up. Linking Words
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, they might become depressed.
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encourage kids to be more motivated and optimistic people, it may create unrealistic attitudes and depression for kids.Linking Words
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