in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positives or negative situation?

Nowadays,most of the public showing interest to have a home over a

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building in several nations.In my opinion, it is a good option to buy a home

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of spending too much money on

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Thisessay

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will discuss the benefits of buying a building.

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of the community are working to earn money for their future life especially to have a building to stay as own.

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,we can do whatever as we like in our apartment without feeling hesitation.It is a tremendous trend running in the society since the public is very much aware of

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money in terms of buying a

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would be a valuable asset in the future.

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,in Canada,most of the migrant population looking to buy a building to stay

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of spending more amount

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because they get bank loans for mortgages with lesser interest rates and an EMI's comes as almost equal to the lease.Even though, it's a long term payback for the public the

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belong to them in the end.

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are eager to gain a mansion through bank loans because everyone has a dream to settle with their family

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their own

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trend is the place gives more security than a rental residence while

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to invest

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for it.

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, one of my friends Mr Ravi has bought land with a home in a village which is a little far from the city

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, he decided it would be better than living in other buildings. In conclusion,all over the world,

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have been following

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trend since it is a good investment for themselves as they know very well.The government should take a step to grant

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for the public if someone wants to buy an apartment or

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