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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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People after graduation start to look around for jobs and their preference of employment is mostly based on personal choice.While some prefer multi-national
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,few others prefer to work in small establishments.In my view,preferring to work at a big corporate has many advantages in terms of
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 growth and salary pay than working for small
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,where
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 progression of a team member is slow and salary is considerably less. Multi-national
companies
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 have their establishments all over the world.Their operations run on huge scales,generating money on a huge scale because of which annual packages offered to the
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 runs in lakhs.They are
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 offered incentives and yearly bonuses,which improves the standard of their living.The
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 working for Google earn more and are given additional benefits in terms of maternity leave and loans at no interest rate to buy their dream homes.Even freshers at the company are given better pay packages.
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 is one main reason for the people selecting big offices.
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, the global establishment of big corporates provides numerous opportunities for the staff to get promoted to higher positions.Staff working at all levels are often motivated to improve
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 before they are considered for the
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 position.
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,a person working as a junior
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 executive has
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 of becoming a senior
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 executive if he meets his annual
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 target for three consecutive years.
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,global corporates transfer their best
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 from a branch of one country office to another branch office.
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 exchange often widens the learning scope of an employee,which
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 is not seen if working for small
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.
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,Microsoft which has branches all over the world,often transfer their
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 globally to increase their exposure level. To conclude,seeking employment in a big or small office is a personal choice of an individual.
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 few prefer to work at small places irrespective of small pay and no growth,I prefer working for big
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, which offer a lot in terms of salary,
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 growth and global exposure. I feel that the money saved during the initial growing phase of a
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 can be later used in case of job cuts or an emergency.

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