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Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think small town life is more suitable. Discuss both sides

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Although
 it is sometimes thought that growing up in the
city
 is worth it for
children
, other
people
 believe that living in the
countryside
 is a better selection. In my opinion, I consider that
children
 who have been raised in the
countryside
 could healthily develop
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their physically and mentally. On the one hand, some
people
 believe that living near nature facilitate
children
 to acquaint various creatures and I agree.
Moreover
, in the
countryside
children
 could avoid electric types of equipment which harm their sight.
For example
, parents have a lot of selections taking their
children
 to various outdoor activities,
for instance
, hiking, climbing and camping.
Furthermore
, there is less competition in a small area between
children
 than in the
city
, the percentages of students are lower than
the
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city
, they could study without excessive stress.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is better if
children
 grow up in an urban
city
. As the abundant resource of education is in the
city
, students can obtain the best-qualified faculties and an excellent teaching environment.
Besides
, most
people
 living concentrated in the
city
,
therefore
, the competition atmosphere between students is higher than in the small town,
however
, it excel them in their studies or tasks which
consequently
 produces better results,
moreover
, as adults, they usually compete against each other, being competed module during school life could motivate them to achieve the best. In conclusion, while
people
 may vary in their opinions, I think that the
countryside
 offers a better environment for
children
 growing in the
countryside
 could realize more about creatures and have healthier mental.
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