In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the advanced
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, all automobiles in the future will be automatically driven without using a
driver
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.
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, it will be only passengers inside the vehicles. In my opinion, the benefits of
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innovation outweigh the drawbacks. 
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of all, using a driverless automobile, people can spend their time together without worrying about the responsibility of controlling the vehicles. They can do other activities
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as sleeping, singing a song, watching TV and playing video games with their companions whereas it is impossible to do these kinds of activities while you have to focus on driving.
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, when going out for
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party, everyone can enjoy drinking alcohol without worrying about the duty of driving.
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,
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makes people's life
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.
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, an automatic car is the better choice for those who cannot drive and do not desire to hire a
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owing to
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privacy. They can travel freely on their own without any disturbing from
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strangers.
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but not least,
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technology
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can prevent
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accident
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from
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inappropriate behaviours of
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the driver
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driver
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drivers
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such
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as careless driving or
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's health problems.
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, the
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to trust
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is a major drawback of
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innovation. Some individuals believe that human decision is superior to
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technology
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. To illustrate, in Thailand, only a few groups of people use an automatic
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function because they do not trust the effectiveness of
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program. They have many concerns
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this
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technology
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.
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,
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problem can be solved by developing more reliable and effective
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and giving the appropriate information
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the users. In summary, travelling by automobiles without a
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brings numerous advantages for humanity
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as making our lives easier and reducing
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traffic accident while only a few disadvantages happen.
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, I believe that the advantages of driverless
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vehicles
outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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