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Government investment in the arsts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in public services instead. Discuss both the views and views and give opinion.

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In modern society, there are many ways of investment in terms of maintaining
facilities
. While some think that subsidising the
arts
 is a waste of money, others state that the
government
 must spend money on
influstructure
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infrastructure
. It is clear that
although
the
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both aspects are necessary, maintaining
the
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public
services
 comes
first
. The
first
 aspect to point out is that the
arts
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art
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 forms should be appreciated as they are important for the public when it comes to entertaining themselves. It is a fact that running a series of
musical
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musicals
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 costs a fortune. If the cost of tickets increased, individuals would avoid watching them.
However
, the
arts
has
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 a great impact on people in terms of education.
For instance
, one can learn history by watching a musical show.
Therefore
, the
government
 should support
facilities
such
 as theatres.
Howevre
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However
, it could be suggested that the basic public
services
 are more important than those entertainment
facilities
. People need to use the public transport system on a daily basis when they work. If the frequency of trains was poor, it would have a negative impact on businesses.
Additionally
, despite having enough art
facilities
, no one would appreciate these
facilities
 if they were located
a
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remote area and there were not enough transport systems.
Thus
, the
first
 choice for the
government
 is investing money in
the
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public
services
. To conclude, there is no doubt that the
arts
 is one of the important aspects for individuals and it should be supported by the
government
.
However
, the public
services
 should be paid more attention than the
arts
. The onus is on the
government
 to maintain people's daily life in order to provide them with a comfortable life in
the
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modern society.
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