some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays,a certain number of the public think that they have more options now compared with the past.I strongly stick to

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point and we will discuss more in the following paragraphs.

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, science and technology

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improved a lot

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, it provides to choose enormous count in terms of buying a brand.

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,most humans are not satisfied to continue on one item for longer periods and they are trying to change occasionally.

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,my uncle is really crazy about new cars and he used to change his car when a new brand car was revealed in the market with new features even the price is higher than the

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,there are several companies introducing the same goods on a daily basis or weekly use with different brand names and

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would help the public to select the best one from a number of choices.

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,even though, the education system is almost equal for some countries the school management offers to parents that they are providing various types of study materials which others do not.The current scenario is very clear that

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number of methods for communities to take as much as they like to have.

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,a certain

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topic,here the society feels confused to buy which one is the best among the options and

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may lead them to opt for a stock which is covered visual appealing in a shop even the quality of the product is poor.

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,in my own experience,I have purchased a cake on 20th January 2021 from a bakery because it looked delicious and drizzled honey over the cake but the taste was not scrumptious in fact.The firms trying to sell their device at any cost

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they have options to buy another company output is good in terms of quality. In conclusion,there are more pros surpass

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cons on

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topic.

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,we can decide which stock is suitable as best for us while other compatible items available in the market.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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Topic Vocabulary:

overwhelmed
decision fatigue
paralysis by analysis
consumerism
globalization
personal autonomy
market saturation
option overload
decision-making process
psychological well-being
buyer's remorse
customization
trade-offs
minimalism
information superhighway

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