Some people say that the main environmental of our time is the loss of particular of plants and animals. Others say that are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In general, most
people
tend to view things differently, some
people
agree that the extinction of
plants
and
animals
is the biggest issue today, while others claim that they are a more important problem nowadays.
However
, in my opinion, I agree with the former viewpoint and
this
essay will give a reason for both views. On the one hand, it is undeniable that nowadays many
plants
and
animals
species are getting loss from our earth.
For example
, there are some special species of
animals
and
plants
in our environment that seem to die soon if we don't help them. If our ecosystem loses all
plants
and
animals
, it will have many effects on our earth because wild
animals
or some
plants
have to live with others, they have some win-win benefits with others and can't live alone by themselves. So everyone should focus on
this
problem as an important thing.
On the other hand
, there are many environmental problems in our society that affects our earth so much
such
as air pollution, rubbish pollution or climate change.
For example
, with rising global temperature, many
people
and
animals
can't live in their daily life. Our planet is getting hotter and the air pollution is
also
bad, there are so many clouds of dust
such
as PM2.5 that made everyone get sick. In conclusion, It is hard to make all
people
view all things in the same ways, even in the case of the loss of certain
plants
or
animals
. Some
people
may agree that there are other problems which are more important to our environment.
However
, to me, even climate change is impacting our lives, I think protecting
plants
and
animals
is more urgent. The cases and examples above have supported my point of view to the best.
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