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Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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The
goverments
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governments
government
 enforce some restrictions on using private
vehicles
 and trucks on particular
days
 and
in
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these
days
 ,
people
 are motivated to
use
 public
transportation
.In my opinion,I completely believe that the benefits of
vehicle-free
days
 interns of public
transportation
 far
outweighs
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 any of the disadvantages it might bring. Admittedly,there are some basic demerits of banning some
vehicles
,
such
 as cars,motorcycles and trucks,in the city centres
in
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on
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 particular
days
.
Firstly
,it might
compromises
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 the
convienence
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convenience
 of travel of many.
In other words
,most
people
 prefer to commute in their own cars or motorbikes and they feel discomfortable when they travel with other
people
 in public transportations.
Secondly
,if it is not permitted to
use
 own
vehicles
 on
vehicle-free
days
 ,all
people
 will have to depend on mass
transportation
 on those
days
 and it could make the public
transportation
 centres overcrowded.
This
also
 may demand more seats in buses and trains which can cause a financial burden on local authorities.
Nevertheless
,despite the disadvantages above,I believe
vehicle-free
days
 can bring about more significant merits. One crucial benefit is that it helps to reduce pollution in the cities,which are the most polluted areas in a country.To explain,when public
transportation
 is encouraged
instead
 of private,the number of
vehicles
 on the road will definitely reduce ,leading to
reduction
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 of co2 emissions and less air contamination.Another obvious benefit is that by controlling private
vehicles
, more
people
 are forced to
use
 public
vehicles
.
This
 gives them an experience of travel in public
transportation
 and if the
travelers
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travellers
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 get a good impression, they will decide to
use
 it again.
For instance
,most of the metro services have all the continent facilities but many
people
 do not
experienced
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 it as
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they
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the
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they
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 have their own car.
Therefore
 ,once they
use
 it, they will be ready to
use
 it even on
the
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non
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non-vehicle-free
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vehicle-free
days
. To conclude,the positive outcomes of
vehicle free
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vehicle-free
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days
 have more weight over the minor drawbacks of
travelers
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travellers
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 in
convience
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convenience
 and crowded
transportation
 centres on these
days
.
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