You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to know more about the new
gym
that recently opened close to my house. I have been planning to start working out for a few weeks and it is good to know about the
gym
being nearby.
Although
, I would like to get some details about the types of membership you provide and their rates as well. It has been a long time since I exercised,
hence
I would prefer a membership for less than 6 months.
Secondly
, what
all
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kinds of types of equipment and
gym
activities are included for members?
This
is something that I look forward to, because I did not have a pleasing experience at the
last
gym
I went to.
Lastly
, I would be interested in some trial sessions at the
gym
,
this
week. It would be even better if I could get some guidance regarding the joining procedure. Thank you for reading
this
letter and I look forward to your from you. Yours Faithfully, Lavin.
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Try to separate different requests into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity and flow.
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Make sure to proofread for minor grammar mistakes, such as 'look forward to your from you.'
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You have clearly stated your purpose for writing and addressed all parts of the task.
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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, suitable for this type of correspondence.
coherence cohesion
You used a proper greeting and closing, addressing the recipient respectfully.
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