You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regard to know more about the new

gym

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that recently opened close to my house. I have been planning to start working out for a few weeks and it is good to know about the

gym

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being nearby.

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, I would like to get some details about the types of membership you provide and their rates as well. It has been a long time since I exercised,

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I would prefer a membership for less than 6 months.

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, what

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kinds of types of equipment and

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activities are included for members?

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is something that I look forward to, because I did not have a pleasing experience at the

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I went to.

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, I would be interested in some trial sessions at the

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week. It would be even better if I could get some guidance regarding the joining procedure. Thank you for reading

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letter and I look forward to your from you. Yours Faithfully, Lavin.

lavinramnani8Sun Oct 20 2024

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coherence cohesion

Try to separate different requests into distinct paragraphs to enhance clarity and flow.

task achievement

Make sure to proofread for minor grammar mistakes, such as 'look forward to your from you.'

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You have clearly stated your purpose for writing and addressed all parts of the task.

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The letter has a warm and friendly tone, suitable for this type of correspondence.

coherence cohesion

You used a proper greeting and closing, addressing the recipient respectfully.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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