Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some infornation is too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

A certain number of the public think that it is effective to pass the informative details as can in art research,business and the education system.Others state that limited notes are really knowledgeable and which should exchange as free of cost.In my opinion,

points

should not keep as a secret while,not detrimental

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the public and will discuss more the topic in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost,the society and the students eager to know about the art and technology or other lessons in terms to gain as costless.

Moreover

, keeping something hidden may arise the discrimination between rich and poor.

For instance

,the government try to hide details from the public even the effect of the notes may affect

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society as harmful.

Secondly

,the students may not get proper education since they can't afford the course fees which may lead them to get disappointed even they have the potential to exploit the details in future.

In addition

,the consequences of hiding some

points

may lead to economic growth as down.

Thirdly

,nowadays more families come forward to start small scale firms

nevertheless

,they feel insure in terms of invest money because of lack of knowledge ,

therefore

,the concerned authorities must reveal the proper

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details

to communities.

On the other hand

,others argue that do not uncover the enunciation to the public because some of them may take

this

advantage to use another way which

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to the world.

For example

,several terrorist groups try to grab the detailed

points

from the authorities indirectly to use destroy the world and fight to prevail in the economy.The scientist and the related staff trying to not publish these

points

to avoid misuse by others. In conclusion,there are many merits and demerits about

this

topic but the advantages surpass the

second

opinion.