At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
In Some
countries
overpopulation of young individuals is a serious issue these days. While there are some drawbacks associated with that young population in some Use synonyms
countries
are more than elderly people, the main benefits are more substantial.
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First
of all, a potential disadvantage of a large Linking Words
number
of young adults may be increasing in the Use synonyms
number
of demanding for food sources. Use synonyms
Therefore
, food shortage is an important issue in these Linking Words
countries
. From an environmental viewpoint, another perceived negative is that increasing global warming. Use synonyms
For example
, if they use their personal car for commuting, it will lead to air pollution which is one of the main reasons for Linking Words
this
issue.
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Secondly
, from an international perspective, a primary advantage of a vast Linking Words
number
of youth in these Use synonyms
countries
is that they will be a good option for some Use synonyms
countries
that need young workforces. In Iran, Use synonyms
for instance
, there are a vast Linking Words
number
of young population with strong credential degrees whom every year emigrate to some Use synonyms
countries
that suffer from a lack of young skilled workforce. Use synonyms
Moreover
, from an economical point, young adults are more familiar with new development in technology than old people. Linking Words
Therefore
, they can be involved in new employment which is needed in their Linking Words
countries
.
To conclude, it is true that reducing the population of elderly people compared with the young adults in some Use synonyms
countries
seem to have some disadvantages under certain circumstances. Use synonyms
However
, the positive effects in terms of providing a new young community for some other Linking Words
countries
that encounter young labour shortages in workplaces and being aware of new technology override disadvantages.Use synonyms
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