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some students like to have online courses, what is your opinion?

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After the Coronavirus pandemic, our mainstream education system undergoes through many changes in the
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 2 years so we have to adapt ourselves to online courses. We used social networks applications to connect with each other without any issue. At
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, it was so challenging for pupils to use
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 new technology
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 many universities didn’t have access to appropriate online systems ,
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, after a while, we didn't receive any criticism about distance learning. After the global vaccination, we got back to traditional classrooms but the demand for online lessons was increasing, a lot of students prefer to educate at home with internet connection because there was lots of benefit in
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 trend ,
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, In
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 fast-paced world we have limited time
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, with studying online, you don’t have to be present at schools or universities
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, it affects the cost of living. It reduces transportation expenses and the tuition fees of these courses are lower than the regular classes. But some
people
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 believe that distance-learning decline our literacy and it requires expensive equipment like computers and a proper internet connection never the less, many students don’t have access to these particular facilities so we must consider
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 with financial problems too. Another adversity is
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 feel the lack of social activities, they need to interact with others and work as a group together. In conclusion, online courses bring a new way to educate
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 and in some ,situations it is much convenient than attendance classes ,
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 we need conventional classrooms
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 humans need to be social and participate in groups so we have to see distance learning as a supplement to typical classes.
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