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Some people say that relationships should be based on honesty and trust. Others believe that it is sometimes necessary to be dishonest in order to maintain harmony. Which approach do you consider to be better in relationships and why?

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It is argued that maintaining interpersonal links is needed
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in honesty and trust, while some
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relationship
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，these values are essential to keep in, whereas, for certain occasions, it could be unnecessary. On the one hand, in
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, particularly for families, best friends and long-term partners in work, being honest is basic to stay related longer and build mutual confidence.
For instance
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trustable, friendly and hardworking employees, because having good personalities enables their working process cooperation to be easier in communication and interaction. and high efficiency. Meanwhile, with sincerity and faith,
people
 can strengthen their friendship. If they speak facts about their real feelings and preferences, it is beneficial for the establishment of healthier
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 in the future, as a strong bonding of friendship.
On the other hand
, like
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 of
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, saving information would be a suitable approach to avoid an uncomfortable feeling to those
people
 who are intimate. It is a fact that there are certain secrets
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 can demolish the life of relatives. If we just choose to speak frankly, it will cause regretful
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 that we cannot accept
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,
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 of a relationship.
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, being dishonest properly would be a better way to maintain remain
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better social bonding. In conclusion, I believe that
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as honesty and trust are crucial in personal interactions
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 while saving data would be a better moment for special situations.
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