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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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The desire to
study
 internationally is on the rise among university
students
 as part of their careers. Learning abroad can help the
students
 to learn a new language and culture,
although
 the cost of studying abroad is tremendous. In my opinion, the benefit of studying abroad outweighs the drawbacks and
this
 essay will examine
this
further
 in detail.
To begin
 with, pursuing higher
study
 in another
country
 helps the
students
 get to know more about their culture, language and see new aspects of
life
. Leading a
life
 in another
country
 can be challenging and the student has to push himself beyond the norm into unusually rigid situations.
For Instance
, when I studied marketing in Canada as a 19-year-old, I had to come out of my comfort zone to manage my work, college, and social
life
.
Therefore
, these difficult situations help the student to grow as a mature, and
this
 is the reason why they choose to
study
 abroad. The greatest drawback of
this
 is the price that comes with it. Sometimes, the cost of learning overseas can be more than the income of the family. To illustrate, the average price of tuition fees, here in Canada, is approximately $16,545.
This
 cost is usually dependent on which college is you choose, and which program you want to
study
 in. When I came to Canada, my fee was more than
this
 number. To conclude, nowadays, many university
students
 tend to get their major education in a foreign
country
. While, studying overseas can bring the opportunity to learn more about foreign cultures, whereas the price of
this
 chance is quite expensive.
On the contrary
, the challenges of managing college
life
 and work-
life
 simultaneously make studying in a foreign
country
 more advantageous than disadvantageous.
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