Last week, you celebrated your birthday with some friends in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed yourselves very much. Write a letter to the restaurant. In your letter mention the food and service explain that you really enjoyed the atmosphere suggest any improvements to make things better

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to express my gratitude to you and your team, for providing

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exceptional service

last

week at your

restraunt

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restaurant

. I was there to celebrate my birthday

along with

some friends, and the

food

was just

mind blowing

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and everybody loved every

food

item. kudos! to the kitchen staff for

such

fast service and great presentation of the

food

Moreover

, The ambience of the

restraunt

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restaurant

was aligning perfectly with the occasion and created a great vibe to enjoy

for

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our group. The live singer which you guys have is just topnotch, he went above and beyond to fulfil our song requests and was kind enough to sing

birthday

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a birthday

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song for me. All these things just made my day way better and

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felt extremely overwhelmed by the hospitality provided. The only suggestion from us will be ,

consider

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opening up a patio

dine

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dine-in

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which can allow people to experience your guys's

food

and services

along with

the beautiful weather. The summer season with the outside place can become an asset for your business and attract more guests. I will be

recomending

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recommending

you guys to all my friends and family and would like to thank you again for

this

amazing experience at your

restraunt

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restaurant

. Yours Truly, Pranav Dhawan

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grammar

Overall, this letter is thorough and well-written, responding to all aspects of the task. However, there are a few grammatical errors, such as 'restraunt' instead of 'restaurant', and issues with capitalization, like 'i' instead of 'I'. Pay close attention to these details to improve your letter further.

structure

Try breaking longer sentences into shorter ones for better readability. For example, the sentence starting with 'The live singer...' could have been split into two.

tone

The tone is appropriate and polite, suitable for a formal letter to a restaurant.

task completion

The letter successfully covers all the points mentioned in the task: food and service, atmosphere, and suggestions for improvement.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

216 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

exceptional service
culinary delights
intriguing ambiance
meticulous attention
flavorful concoctions
impeccable presentation
charming decor
ambient music
constructive feedback
vegetarian options
seating arrangement
heartfelt appreciation
wholeheartedly recommend
return visit
enhance the experience

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