Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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One school of thought mentions that
parents
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are responsible to teach their
children
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how to be good members of
society
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,
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where as
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, another school of thought, notifies that the best place to learn
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is a school.
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of all, there is a great saying of a famous writer that a child learns from his or her own home either a good thing or a bad thing.
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is a place where
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raised their
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.
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,
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are role
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for their
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. In my opinion, it is a big responsibility of
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to guide their
children
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in order to make them
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better contributors
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communities.
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, if my mother is going through
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major domestic violence by my father
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, definitely in later
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my brother would
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adopt
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this
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sort of thing which will ultimately
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affect
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effect
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affect
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the norms of
society
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.
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, the personality which
children
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admire the most after their
parents
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is a teacher. Teachers have a big impact on one’s
life
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because they are companions, guiders, friends as well as colleagues. They make them learn the basic manners which are expected from every individual in a
society
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. If I take an example of my teachers
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they have
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great influence on my entire
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. Before meeting them, I was a person who
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smoking every single day despite the fact, it is indigenous to our health.
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, with their guidance and
support
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I quit smoking and join a smoking cessation campaign.
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, I became a better version of myself as well as for my
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. In a nutshell, I think that
parents
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along with the teachers have a great influence on
children
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’s
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either in a positive way or in a negative way. These both personalities together bring a change to make
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children
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children
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a
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good members of
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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