Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
One school of thought mentions that
parents
are responsible to teach their children
how to be good members of society
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whereas
where as
, another school of thought, notifies that the best place to learn Correct your spelling
whereas
this
is a school.
First
of all, there is a great saying of a famous writer that a child learns from his or her own home either a good thing or a bad thing. Home
is a place where Change the article
A home
parents
raised their children
. In addition
, parents
are role model
for their Fix the agreement mistake
models
children
. In my opinion, it is a big responsibility of parents
to guide their children
in order to make them a
better contributors Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
of
communities. Change preposition
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For instance
, if my mother is going through a
major domestic violence by my father Remove the article
apply
then
, definitely in later life
my brother would adapt
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adopt
this
sort of thing which will ultimately Correct your spelling
affect
effect
the norms of Correct your spelling
affect
society
.
Secondly
, the personality which children
admire the most after their parents
is a teacher. Teachers have a big impact on one’s life
because they are companions, guiders, friends as well as colleagues. They make them learn the basic manners which are expected from every individual in a society
. If I take an example of my teachers then
they have a
great influence on my entire Add a missing verb
had a
life
. Before meeting them, I was a person who do
smoking every single day despite the fact, it is indigenous to our health. Change the verb form
does
However
, with their guidance and support
I quit smoking and join a smoking cessation campaign. Add a comma
,support
As a result
, I became a better version of myself as well as for my society
.
In a nutshell, I think that parents
along with the teachers have a great influence on children
’s life
either in a positive way or in a negative way. These both personalities together bring a change to make a
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children
a child
children
a
good members of Correct the article-noun agreement
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society
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