Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

One school of thought mentions that
parents
are responsible to teach their
children
how to be good members of
society
,
Correct your spelling
whereas
show examples
where as
Correct your spelling
whereas
show examples
, another school of thought, notifies that the best place to learn
this
is a school.
First
of all, there is a great saying of a famous writer that a child learns from his or her own home either a good thing or a bad thing.
Home
Change the article
A home
show examples
is a place where
parents
raised their
children
.
In addition
,
parents
are role
model
Fix the agreement mistake
models
show examples
for their
children
. In my opinion, it is a big responsibility of
parents
to guide their
children
in order to make them
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
better contributors
of
Change preposition
to
show examples
communities.
For instance
, if my mother is going through
a
Remove the article
apply
show examples
major domestic violence by my father
then
, definitely in later
life
my brother would
adapt
Correct your spelling
adopt
show examples
this
sort of thing which will ultimately
Correct your spelling
affect
show examples
effect
Correct your spelling
affect
show examples
the norms of
society
.
Secondly
, the personality which
children
admire the most after their
parents
is a teacher. Teachers have a big impact on one’s
life
because they are companions, guiders, friends as well as colleagues. They make them learn the basic manners which are expected from every individual in a
society
. If I take an example of my teachers
then
they have
a
Add a missing verb
had a
show examples
great influence on my entire
life
. Before meeting them, I was a person who
do
Change the verb form
does
show examples
smoking every single day despite the fact, it is indigenous to our health.
However
, with their guidance and
support
Add a comma
,support
show examples
I quit smoking and join a smoking cessation campaign.
As a result
, I became a better version of myself as well as for my
society
. In a nutshell, I think that
parents
along with the teachers have a great influence on
children
’s
life
either in a positive way or in a negative way. These both personalities together bring a change to make
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
children
a child
show examples
children
a
Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
show examples
good members of
society
Submitted by sanireimoo on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
What to do next:
Look at other essays: