In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cell phone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Generally speaking, paying on mobile gadgets apps has become pretty universal.
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, we have a bunch of pros and cons in
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trend, but considering the fact that we live in a technology-based society and we use computers, mobile phones and laptops on a regular daily basis, there are more advantages on
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of all, paying on mobile phones apps is more convenient and time-saving.
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want to pay any bill for the electricity, cable or anything else, I can do that in a few easy clicks on my phone that would take me a couple of minutes to finish,
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of going to the post office and waiting in the line for a half-hour and wasting my time. Another benefit that online payment can enable is that you do not have to carry money anywhere you go, because you always have your phone with you and you can easily pay anything with your mobile app.
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to that, technology is not developed everywhere at the same level, so maybe in some parts of the country, or in some small ,
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you do not have the ability to pay with your mobile app or to even pay online. Due to technological development and innovations, online payments have risen to the level where they are a common everyday thing. As well as many new inventions having advantages and disadvantages, I think that
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • speed
  • eliminate
  • biometric verification
  • encryption
  • cashless society
  • environmentally friendly
  • impulsive buying
  • overspending
  • dependency
  • battery drain
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • access
  • smart technology
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