In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, there is an increasing number of

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having health problems related to rubbish

food

. Some public believe that the authorities should collect a higher tax on these kinds of

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. I totally agree with

this

because it will help decrease the consumers demand

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food

and

also

encourage

people

to cook

a healthy meals

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at

home

.

First

of all, taxing higher on trash

food

will make a huge fall in the demand for it. Obviously, when the

price

of fast foods raises high, the amount of consumption will go down. If the product

price

is high, a huge number of

people

cannot afford

this

product many times like the way it was in the past, which leads to lower consumption. From

this

scenario, it is believed that imposing a higher tax on detrimental

food

can be effective in lowering the amount of consumption.

For example

, if someone eats junk

food

thrice a week before, they might eat it twice or one time a week.

Moreover

, it will encourage

people

to cook healthy dishes at

home

. Because when the

price

of unhealthy

food

gets much higher, cooking

food

at

home

to be a better alternative choice. To illustrate more, if the government impose a higher tax on these foods, they will consider cooking dishes at

home

. Because cooking

food

is cheaper and even more nutrient for the body. As a

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result they will turn to homemade

food

which is cheaper and better for health.

For example

, junk

food

such

as

burger

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burgers

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, fried chickens, from a restaurant has been someone choice for lunch because of its reasonable

price

if the expense increase they will eat homemade

food

. In conclusion, I completely agree that increasing tariffs on fast

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food food

is an effective way to protect public health by decreasing the demand for junk

food

and encouraging

people

to cook healthy

food

at

home

.