Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

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According to some, an advert can influence our minds and make us buy things regardless of whether they are needed or not. Others think that
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of different types of advertising is that high, that people are not interested in it anymore and do not pay any attention. I believe that a qualitative ad can persuade anyone to buy anything.
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, some people who work in the sphere of marketing or PR do not perceive ads due to their profession.
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with, eye-catching advertisements are something that always grabs attention. And some of us are ready to buy goods
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if they are promoted and shown on TV or
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the Internet frequently.
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, I consider myself as the one who is easy to persuade to purchase products. Advertising in my browser adjusts to my requests.
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, when I started to look for a new lipstick, I received pop-up ads for a week.
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,
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of one, I bought myself two new lipsticks, because they had "completely new
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" and an "incredibly
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price".
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, advertising
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influences on some professionals, because of their knowledge and experience in the promotion of goods.
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, according to the latest researches of the Russian newspaper ‘Metro’, only 40% of surveyed bloggers and marketing and PR specialists are ready to buy spontaneously, as well as more than half of them try to analyse how the exact piece of advertising was filmed and which technics were used to create it. Because of
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a serious approach, professionals do not see ads
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usual consumers do, they interpret it as a job or as a task for work. In conclusion, I think, that despite those who works in a marketing sphere and has a professional deformation,
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is an extremely powerful tool on a market and can rule customers’ desires.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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