Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, the idea of how we can see
films
to be absolutely enjoyed has been a controversial topic for
people
. While a group of
people
believe that we can use a smartphone like tablets to see
films
in our homes. The other group firmly argues that seeing
films
in a
cinema
has more pleasure. Both views will be discussed at length in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, the supporters of that nowadays we have the opportunity see
films
on their phone bring some reasons for their claim. As far as they are concerned, in the past
people
could not see
films
anywhere and anytime but now it has become convenient .
In other words
, technology is helped to them that they can use their leisure time optimum .They
further
emphasize the point that
people
have diverse choices on their phones for film’s category and they will opt for suitable subjects.
For example
, in Iran with technological
progress
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people
usually see
last
films
on online platforms and websites like Namava.
On the other hand
, there are some others who are of the opinion that seeing a film in a
cinema
has specific enjoyment. The proponents of
this
idea declare that
cinema
facilities and equipment can create convenient and suitable circumference for audiences.
Also
,
cinema
can bring the population together, make friendly relations and happy times.
For instance
, we usually see
films
in
cinema
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with the Dolby voice system. In fact , it is more attractive than when the film is seen on a phone or tablet. In conclusion, both views can be considered partially acceptable. But, when it comes to my own viewpoint, I have to say I prefer to have various experiences of seeing
films
in different cinemas with my family and close friends .I firmly believe that
cinema
can make a memorable picture of famous
films
in my mind.
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