A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. HelShe has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holliday Describe some possible disadvantages Say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Rahul,
It's been a long time since we met and I hope we can meet soon. I've been doing some research regarding the camping holiday you mentioned.
It's a great idea to spend some time experiencing camping as it will give you a whole different experience.
Also
, you will really enjoy nature as you'll be staying there for 2 days! Also
, you'll be able to see the galaxy at night as camping sites are usually away from the city which provides the best view of the night sky.
However
, there are multiple disadvantages and things to take care of. Please make sure to keep your car's fuel level full as usually the gas stations are far away. Also
, please keep pepper spray for self-defence in case you encounter wild animals. You might not get a proper mobile network so be prepared for that as well.
I hope you enjoy your camping holidays and we can chat about our camping plan this
summer once you return.
Best wishes,
Tirth tSubmitted by tirththakkar23 on
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Task Achievement
Consider providing more detailed advice and examples based on your personal camping experiences to enrich the response.
Coherence and Cohesion
Try to use a wider range of linking words and cohesive devices to further enhance the flow of your letter.
Positive Feedback
You provided a thoughtful explanation on why your friend would enjoy a camping holiday, highlighting the joy of nature and the opportunity to see the night sky.
Structure
Your letter has a clear structure with a greeting, body paragraphs addressing the task prompts, and a closing.
Tone
The overall tone of your letter is friendly and supportive, which is suitable for writing to a friend.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite