Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently it has been a debatable question whether countries’
economy
is highly related to the length of average working
time
. From my perspective,
although
countries with longer working
time
could increase
economy
moderately, industry and agriculture are more essential and vital compared with working overtime. A great number of people advocates that working for a long period has a positive impact on economical success in plenty of nations especially developing countries.
In other words
, productivity will be higher if employees would like to work overtime.
For instance
, Japan is the
third largest
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nation in
economy
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after America and China. Meanwhile, the average working
time
in Japan
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the highest in Asia, which enables Japanese citizens to get satisfying salaries.
Furthermore
, it has caused a dramatically economical increase in Japan since
1950s
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.
However
, in most cases, others strongly assert that there is no necessary relation between countries’
economy
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and a long working
time
. Alternatively, governments are supposed to take action to give priority to developing local manufacturing and agriculture.
For example
, the folks in Southeast Asia work much longer than people in West Europe;
however
,
economy
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the economy
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in West Europe
such
as France and Italy is much higher than in Thailand, Vietnam as well as Laos due to completely advanced industrial and agricultural systems. Over the period, it is not necessary for Europeans to work
in
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a long
time
. To summarize, longer working
time
could uplift countries’
economy
slowly, whereas it is not the most productive and effective method in most
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countries
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic success
  • working hours
  • productivity
  • sustainable development
  • work-life balance
  • labor laws
  • efficiency
  • gross domestic product (GDP)
  • burnout
  • occupational health
  • technological innovation
  • industrialized nations
  • emerging economies
  • workforce
  • competitiveness
  • workplace culture
  • employee turnover
  • quality of life
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