Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently it has been a debatable question whether countries’
economy
is highly related to the length of average working Use synonyms
time
. From my perspective, Use synonyms
although
countries with longer working Linking Words
time
could increase Use synonyms
economy
moderately, industry and agriculture are more essential and vital compared with working overtime.
A great number of people advocates that working for a long period has a positive impact on economical success in plenty of nations especially developing countries. Use synonyms
In other words
, productivity will be higher if employees would like to work overtime. Linking Words
For instance
, Japan is the Linking Words
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third largest
nation in Add a hyphen
third-largest
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economy
after America and China. Meanwhile, the average working Add an article
the economy
time
in Japan Use synonyms
in
the highest in Asia, which enables Japanese citizens to get satisfying salaries. Correct your spelling
is
Furthermore
, it has caused a dramatically economical increase in Japan since Linking Words
1950s
.
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the 1950s
However
, in most cases, others strongly assert that there is no necessary relation between countries’ Linking Words
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economy
and a long working Fix the agreement mistake
economies
time
. Alternatively, governments are supposed to take action to give priority to developing local manufacturing and agriculture. Use synonyms
For example
, the folks in Southeast Asia work much longer than people in West Europe; Linking Words
however
, Linking Words
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economy
in West Europe Add an article
the economy
an economy
such
as France and Italy is much higher than in Thailand, Vietnam as well as Laos due to completely advanced industrial and agricultural systems. Over the period, it is not necessary for Europeans to work Linking Words
in
a long Change preposition
for
time
.
To summarize, longer working Use synonyms
time
could uplift countries’ Use synonyms
economy
slowly, whereas it is not the most productive and effective method in most Use synonyms
of
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apply
countries
.Add an article
the countries
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