Some people think that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, most
children
seem to travel to
home from Change preposition
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school
along with the sunset, which is much earlier than their counterpart
in the past. For Fix the agreement mistake
counterparts
this
reason, some people argue that children
are too free at present.
In the past, after school
, there was a lot of housework
waiting
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forwaiting
children
to help their parents
-- taking care of little sister or brother and cooking for example
. Those things took a large percentage of so-called free time and thus
children
had not much freedom
to focus on their own hobbies even after class. By contrast
, parents
nowadays will try their best or even employ a servant to do all housework
so that children
only need to concentrate on their study
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studies
Therefore
, when they go home from school
, what is waiting
them is clean, tidy rooms and well-prepared meals. That means they can enjoy more Add the preposition
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freedom
to do what they are interested in.
However
, even though there is no need for children
to devote themselves to housework
any more
, there is much more homework. Correct your spelling
anymore
Besides
, because of the delightful desire of every parent that their offspring will be superior, they often enroll
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children
to take some after-class lessons to assist them to consolidate what they have learned at school
. What is more, at weekend some children
even hurry to several specialty
training classes that their Change the spelling
speciality
parents
force them to attend. Indeed, they possess much less freedom
.
In conclusion, I strongly think that although
current children
do not need to do housework
, they have less freedom
and more pressure from parents
and society, because their schedule after class arranged by their mom or dad is much too full.Submitted by 1378468145 on
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