Some people think that children nowadays have too much freedom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most

children

seem to travel

to

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home from

school

along with the sunset, which is much earlier than their

counterpart

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in the past. For

this

reason, some people argue that

children

are too free at present. In the past, after

school

, there was a lot of

housework

waiting

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children

to help their

parents

-- taking care of little sister or brother and cooking

for example

. Those things took a large percentage of so-called free time and

thus

children

had not much

freedom

to focus on their own hobbies even after class.

By contrast

,

parents

nowadays will try their best or even employ a servant to do all

housework

so that

children

only need to concentrate on their

study

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.

Therefore

, when they go home from

school

, what is

waiting

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them is clean, tidy rooms and well-prepared meals. That means they can enjoy more

freedom

to do what they are interested in.

However

, even though there is no need for

children

to devote themselves to

housework

any more

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, there is much more homework.

Besides

, because of the delightful desire of every parent that their offspring will be superior, they often

enroll

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their

children

to take some after-class lessons to assist them to consolidate what they have learned at

school

. What is more, at weekend some

children

even hurry to several

specialty

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training classes that their

parents

force them to attend. Indeed, they possess much less

freedom

. In conclusion, I strongly think that

although

current

children

do not need to do

housework

, they have less

freedom

and more pressure from

parents

and society, because their schedule after class arranged by their mom or dad is much too full.