You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the cooking
course
that I attended last
month at your school. I feel privileged to be a part of such
a course
.
I love cooking and this
course
has provided me the
necessary impetus to try out multiple dishes. Before Add the preposition
with the
this
course
, I was so naive that I was unable to prepare breakfast or even bake a cake. This
course
has provided all the complex preparation of dishes in the simplest way. Among many other things, I like the practicals on different cuisines the most. I can comfortably say that I really enjoyed those two hours of class every day.
Now, I have started to participate in local and regional cooking competitions. I have been a part of as many as 25 such
events and won most of them. Furthermore
, I am also
thinking to start my own catering business.
However
, I do not know much about Asian cuisines.I would like to know if the school has any course
that can provide the
basic idea on the preparation of Asian and Italian dishes. If yes, I would definitely like to enrol for the same.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Margarett ChasyCorrect article usage
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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