You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter -give details of your study plan -explain why you want a part-time job -suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Jack Hope you doing fine.I have good news to share with you.I got accepted into the University of British Columbia.The university is quite close to your place and I'm in need of your help. I will be studying quantum mechanics at the university as a part of my thesis.I was always passionate about learning physics and
this
opportunity means a lot for my career.
This
is a 1-year course divided into 2 semesters.The
first
semester starts in the
month
of January and ends in the
month
of May.The
second
semester starts in the
month
of June and it successfully will finish in the
month
of December,wherein I have to submit my project and get it graded before flying back.
Although
it is a short course,still the tuition fee is quite high.I am applying for an education loan and borrowing some money from my parents.I will be in need of a part-time job to sustain myself,and
also
to help pay back the loan in instalments. You know that I'm good at communication.I think
this
skill will be good enough for me to work in a hotel as a reception boy.While working for a hotel,I need not worry about accommodation as well as food.I will be getting tips too from satisfied customers. Take care and reply soon. Your friend. Rehana
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enroll
  • curriculum
  • academic schedule
  • living expenses
  • practical experience
  • work-life balance
  • job listings
  • referral
  • recommendation
  • potential employer
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