International travel is becoming cheaper and countries are opening their doors to move and more tourist. Do the advantages of increased tourists outweigh disadvantages?
In
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cutting-edge era, travelling overseas is becoming cheaper compared to the past and many countries are welcome to move and more visitors. Linking Words
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phenomenon has more upside than downside. In Linking Words
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To begin
with, the increasing number of tourists have tremendously given a foreign exchange to the country since Linking Words
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of business would be affected. Use synonyms
For instance
, Indonesia's government is massively doing campaigns about new prioritized places for holidays like Danau Toba, a place in North Sumatera. If more tourists came to that place, Linking Words
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of job opportunities would be opened and the economy of that region would arise. Use synonyms
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, more and more people over the world will know the places as the advancement of technology has made it possible, Linking Words
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As a result
, many investments from outside could come to invest in that country, which increases the economic aspects.
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On the other hand
, if small enterprises are not creative enough to build their business, they are more likely cannot compete with giant Linking Words
companies
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, most businesses are dominated by foreign Linking Words
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To sum up, the need of the time is to take the benefit of the journey to other nations. Use synonyms
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of income taxes will be earned by the government and Use synonyms
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of jobs will be opened, yet, the local Use synonyms
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are forced to compete with the bigger parties. Despite that, the advantages overlooked the disadvantages.Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...