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Companies use different ways to increase sales. What different ways do companies use to increase sales? What is the most effective way?

Nowadays,
companies
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 have to find their modern and special strategies to attract
customers
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 and survive in
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 competitive
world
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. There are a variety of methods to increase their
products
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, but I personally think that introducing new special
products
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 is the best
way
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 to grow their
sales
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. Primarily, the most popular
way
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 to advertise their goods to every customer all over the
world
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 is marketing. With the widespread use of the internet,
companies
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 tend to introduce their
products
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 through social networks like Facebook or Instagram, which is not only to launch a product but
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 to boost the
sales
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 of a product.
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, another strategy businesses choose is announcing promotional offers and discounts. Most
companies
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 organise some special days for
customers
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 like buy one get one free or Black Friday are very common these days to attract people.
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, the introduction of new
products
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 is
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 a successful strategy.
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 is because today’s
customers
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’ aesthetic is changing quickly, if
companies
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 do not create new
products
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, they are likely to be left behind and find it difficult to hold their
customers
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. Though advertising and marketing are extremely persuasive, producing new items is the most effective
way
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 for
companies
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 to raise their
sales
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.
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, Mercedes Benz, which is the most popular brand of car in the
world
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, is always one of the best choices for
customers
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.
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 is because every 4 years they will improve their standard and change design to suit the tastes and bring a new feeling for
customers
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.
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, they always stand at the top of car’s
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 and become more popular on the streets all over the
world
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. In conclusion,
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 I agree that marketing and promotions are effective methods for businesses to raise their
sales
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, I argue that introducing a new product is the best
way
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 to increase the
numbers
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 of
customers
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.

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