In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

These days,
vehicle
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is one of the most important factors in parts of people’s lives. If a question about
driverless
vehicles is addressed, it will be challenging for us to reach our decision
in
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this
controversial issue. From my perspective,
benefits
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the benefits
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of
driverless
vehicles outweigh
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its
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disadvantage
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disadvantages
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because of reducing
of
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accident
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accidents
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and free
time
. The
first
reason is that
driverless
vehicles can decrease the
incident
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of road accidents because
this
vehicle can restrict their speed so, no
car
runs more than legal speed limits.
For example
, if people drive their
car
when they are not conscious, they can drive to 180
kilometers
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per
hours
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hour
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.
This
can cause
car
accidents and many significant adverse effects.
In
contrast
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if people use
car
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being
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driverless
, it can set
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a high
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high speed
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limit which may be mot more than 100
kilometers
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per hour. It is
not
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no
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risk
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a risk
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for crushing so
this
point will reduce the accident in the future.
Furthermore
, the
second
reason is that we can have more free
time
to do our activities
such
as having
meal
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, making up face, taking a nap in our
car
instead
of driving. We can save
our
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time
.
For instance
, I spend my
time
to drive
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to my workplace around 30 minutes. If I use
driverless
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car
, I will have more
30
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than 30
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minutes to make up my face in my
car
before
working
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. It means that I can use that
time
to prepare my breakfast in the morning
instead
of making up
face
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my face
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. In conclusion, in the future,
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the vehicle
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vehicle
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vehicles
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will be
driverless
is the best
choices
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for me because it alleviates
a
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problem of
car
accidents and it can help people have more free times to do some activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • driverless vehicles
  • advantages
  • disadvantages
  • increased safety
  • reduced traffic congestion
  • improved efficiency
  • accessibility
  • disabled
  • elderly
  • job displacement
  • privacy concerns
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