Some people think that parents should teach children how to be a good members of the society. Others,however believe school is the best place to learn it. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Certain individuals

,

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claim that parents ought to teach their

offsprings

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how to be

a better members

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a better member

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of

society

whereas others insist that

school

is the best place to learn how to become responsible in

society

. In my view,

parent

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the parent

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is the best in

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how to be a better member of

society

into their young ones because they spent the larger part of

there

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time together and they are seen as their

role

models. For some individuals, parents should be the ones guiding and teaching their

children

how to become responsible in

the

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society

.

This

is because a larger part of their time

are

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spent in the same place and they are seen as the

first

contact in

children

lives .

for instance

, a mother is the primary

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caregiver

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care giver

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of their

offsprings

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.

Thus

, it is believed that they should be the

one

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ones

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teaching the

children

the norms and rules of

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society

, in other for them to be a responsible adult.

Conversely

, some believe it the

role

of the

school

to teach

children

how to be

a better members

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of

society

. What

this

implies is that

school

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have a course curriculum

which

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consists of teaching on how to survive and be

a good members

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a good member

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of the community.

Thus

, it is

role

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of

teacher

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to be

parts

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of student life and teaches them how to act in the best way in

society

. Many studies have shown that high percentage of successful

adut

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adult

are from

school

teaching. I equally believe that parent is the best teachers in teaching their young ones how to become

good

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a good

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member of

society

.

In other words

, they are seen as the

role

models and they must

instill

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how

become

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the best in the community

in

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them

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by teaching and training. In conclusion, some people hold the view that

school

is the best environment to learn how

be

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in best behaviour in the

society

.

However

,I believe parents

is

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best

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source in training their

children

how to be

a

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good citizen.